In my final draft, I filmed the video by starting with my teacher asking me a question, which added a more professional touch to the video. I spoke in a calm and clear tone, delivering an interesting and detailed response to the question. However, there are a few areas I would like to improve. I wish I had looked at the camera more frequently to create a stronger connection with the audience. Additionally, I could have spoken with greater confidence and used more expressive body language to enhance my delivery. These small changes would help make the video even more effective and professional.